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exploeregirl29
04-04-2008, 10:44 PM
:blush:I am writing this to you in regards to the I601 petition that I have filed for my husband.** My husband came to the untied states to make a better life for himself.* He never thought that he would fall in love and start a family.* If my husband isn’t allowed to return to the United States, or if I have to move to Mexico.** My health conditions the way they are I don’t know how I am going to get by.** With him gone extreme hardship is inevitable.* Family History:I met my husband June 2003.* He worked for are family nursery, Balling and burl aping trees.* I at the time I worked in sales and marketing.* As everyone got to know alien better we all watched him grow as an individual.* He moved up the company.* he learned English.* He earned respect and admiration from his fellow employees and superiors. *Over the years I got to know what a beautiful human being he is.* I fell in love with my best friend.* He is the love of my life as I am to him.* We have a lot in common.* We both are loving and hardworking people.* We love children, animals, and the outdoors.* I have never been separated from my husband.* I and my daughter would suffer extreme hardship Mentally, Physically, and financially.* If he was not allowed to return to the United States.* Medical:A move to Mexico would cause severe hardship.* My health care and lack there of and health conditions are something to consider.* I have health issues that would be negatively impacted, to the point of being life threating,** If I do not have access to expert health care.* I was diagnosed with Attention Defecate Disorder in 1997 have been seen by the same doctor for over ten years.* I take two 10mg once a day.* I have evidence of this as provided. (Example A)** I am required to visit my doctor every six months or even more often depending on what is going on in my life.* * Without my medication I would not be able to function.* My husband has been great he helps me by keeping me organized and focused.* There is not a day that he doesn’t forget to tell me to take my medications.* *Two years ago I was diagnosed with hypothyroid disease.* Right after my dad passed away.* I and my husband couldn’t figure out why I was gaining so much weight.* I was also suffering from serious amounts of fatigue.* Well when we were having trouble getting pregnant my gynecologist recommended to me to get my thyroid checked.* I got my thyroid checked and my levels where low.* Around one month later I was pregnant with my daughter.** My gynecologist kept a close eye on my and the baby.* People with thyroid disease have higher chance of miscarriage.* Thank god my daughter was born healthy.* My blood had to be checked the whole term of the pregnancy to monitor my thyroid levels. Still now I get my thyroid checked every 3 months.* My husband has helped me considerably to get me threw the emotional and physical symptoms of the disease. I currently 88mg.* Without proper treatment and maintence the thyroid can become in larged and have to be surgically removed.* Now because of my thyroid my weight has gotten out of control.* I suffer from obesity.* My doctor had advised me that if my body doesn’t respond to the thyroid medicine.* I will have to go for the lapband surgery.* I also suffer from asthma.* I have had asthma my whole life.** My asthma is set off my certain air pollutants.* There is no way I could move to live in Mexico.* The pollution is great.** I take albuterol four times a day.** I also take singular to prevent an attack.* If I don’t get medical attention when I get a sever attack.* I could suffer grave consequences.* Children:The greatest hardship is my daughter will suffer without my husband her father.* The emotional stress and emptiness my child will feel without her father is impossible to justify in words.* The attention, love and care that my husband plays in my daughter’s life are instrumental.* My health conditions at times I can’t give my daughter the care she needs.* My husband picks up the slack.My family plays a major role in the upbringing of my daughter.** If you took my daughter away from her grandmother and her aunt and uncle.* Would be a great detriment to her mental health.* (I have evidence for this)* The influence that her grandmother plays in her life can’t be measured.*** My daughter is the light of her grandmother’s life.* When I go to work my mother will watch the baby.* Being a new mother my mom helps in all the aspects of raising my daughter.* We live with my mother.* My daughter is very blessed to have such a close relationship with her grandmother.* I had the same relationship with my grandparents and expect nothing less for my daughter.* It is very scary to think that my daughter might have to go to school in Mexico and have to leave my family.*** I truly do not want my daughter to grow up without the wisdom and love of my family.* My mother is a successful business woman.* She is much respected in her industry and in New England.* She is mine and soon will be my daughter’s role model.* I have already lost one parent.* If my husband doesn’t get to come back home it will be devastating to all of us.Family Ties:The relationship that I have with my family is rare and unique.* Feb. 22, 2006 we tragically lost my father to a cerebral hemorrhage.*** My father Died at the young age of 55. Losing him has been one of the toughest things are family has had to go threw.* We all worked together.* Learning to live without him in are lives has been very traumatic.** We all greave his death in are own way.* We all have are moments when we cry.* My husband has been my savoir threw this terrible experience.* He also has a great relationship with my younger brother.* They often go fishing together on my brother’s boat.** My brother had depended on my husband for sharing his troubles and when he feels upset about losing our father and what ever else is bothering him.* My husband and my brother act more like brothers at times.* No one can replace the bond that they have If my husband was not allowed back to the us.* We already lost one of are family members.* Losing another would be devastating. *My mother has suffered the greatest lose.* She lost her husband, best friend, and her life partner of 36years.* (Included marriage certificate, fathers death certificate other evidence)** My mother loves my husband like a son.* She depends on him for emotional support and friendship.* She owns a horse farm.* We sell and show horses.** Since my fathers death my husband has taken over a lot of the chores that my father has done.* He also helps around the house.* We live with my mother in her large house.* My husband has been instrumental in my mother healing during the grieving process.* We also are a companion to my mother now that my father doesn’t live with her anymore.** He has taken the burden off of her as far as hiring a man to do the extra chores.* Education:I am going to school part time to be a registered nurse.* I took a few years off working for my parents.* Now with one of there business sold.* I have the time to finish.* There is no way I could move to Mexico to finish my education.* I don’t speak Spanish.* I have the support from my mother who will watch my daughter while I go to school.* (Included is my unofficial transcripted)Lack of language Skills:* I do not speak Spanish.* Shopping, Education, Safety and everyday life would be greatly affected if I had to live in a country where I could not communicate.*

gatita
04-05-2008, 02:22 AM
You have some great arguments here, but...it needs to be separated out. Elaborate on the hardships much more, and discard ones that don't fit. Complete the explanation of one hardship before moving on to another. The format it's in here is not easily scanable. Read the stickies before you continue. Good luck.